Briar Rose and the Beast

A twisted fairy tale. 

The story of the Rosy Beauty and the Beast.

One ending(I'm sorry).

It's my first story uploading something like this here—constructive criticism would be appreciated if you could.  I'm aware there is probably some grammar mistakes in this, but this is just me experimenting.

WHY IS THIS ONE OF MY MOST PLAYED GAMES WHY

THERE'S SO MANY MISTAKES AHHHH

I MADE THIS IN HIGH SCHOOL